Friday, January 17, 2014

Celebrating the Rewrite + Indie Book Review: Last Days in the Life of Jillian


For VikLit’s Celebrate the Small Things blog hop, I’ll talk about one of the things that has been taking over my life….

After the mad dash to complete the first draft of Anticipating Dawn, and after receiving treasured comments from my first beta reader, I’ve come to realize that now I need to give this sequel more care. This is only my second novel. And me being me, it’s a darned strange story. Thus, it needs more care in the creation of its connective tissues to make sure the synapses engage properly. I have to remember that and be happy to have the ability to perform this intricate procedure, and to temper my desire to rush and start sending out query letters! Woe is me….

I remember when writing my first book, Anticipation of the Penitent, and believed it was complete. Come some several months later, I’d realized that it was only about halfway done. Limbs need to be amputated and reattached, grafts executed and patches affixed before it could have the life I meant for it. I do believe Anticipating Dawn is much more than halfway done, but it is not yet whole. 

Didn’t I expect this? Didn’t I tell myself it wouldn’t be complete for a few months yet? Still, my head nearly convinced me that it was close to perfect and needed only a couple of tweaks. Crazy brain!

Well, the operation has begun, and Anticipating Dawn will be in recovery (editing time) in about three months (Two? One and a half, maybe?) to be revealed as my much more sound second bouncing baby creation. And what a beautiful creature it will be!

I'm looking forward to reading your celebrations!





The Last Day in the Life of Jillian (The Last Days)

The first book in a series of The Last Days.
Jillian and Evan are trapped and Evan is ill. Jillian recalls the events that have led to their demise and documents the stages of Evan's infection as he changes into a being to be afraid of.

My Review

It's been a long time since I've been truly scared reading a book or, in this case, a story. This one did scare me, caused my heart to beat faster from the suspense of it all, and it continued to long after the story was over. I don't think I've ever read a zombie book or story, and this was a great introduction to the genre. Loved the main character. Jillian's voice carried me throughout, and her neighbors and husband, as well as her descriptions of her sisters, seemed very real. The scenes, conversations, zombie outbreak, all very believable. The storytelling was superbly done, with the side stories (or explanations) giving it a grotesquely genuine spice. Thankfully, I didn’t have any scary or even strange dreams after reading this.

There are some editing issues that detracted slightly from the story as a whole. In the post note, the author does mention the hope to get an editor in the future. I still recommend this story for those who like a little freaky fictional, but smartly done, scare in their lives.

About the Author

Julie A. Brown, also writing as Julie Cooper Brown. Julie has always loved to write poetry and the like in her younger years. She has written The Last Day in the Life of Jillian as her first attempt at writing fiction and hopes to break through with this new novella. Julie enjoys playing guitar, piano and violin though she is unable to read music. And although she has no degrees to brag of and only an eighth grade education, she is confident in her writing and only hopes to improve her technique in the future.

25 comments:

  1. I can understand you wanting to get "Anticipating Dawn" out there. It's so easy to believe your work is ready when you feel eager to publish. Without an agent and advice I find that I could have made improvements when it's too late, as the work is already on Amazon as an ebook.
    You're wise. Take your time and it will be fine.
    All the best, Nancy.

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    1. Thanks Fanny. It is best to wait, even though that's a hard thing to do. There's always changes that can be made, no matter how much we try and edit. So, having additional readers is such a great blessing.

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  2. Good luck with your book! It'll be great :)

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  3. Best of luck with your rewrite. Sounds like an intriguing book.

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  4. Congrats on a good book Julie. Nancy writing is a journey and I wish you all the bes

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  5. Great review, Nancy ;)

    Have fun with the rewrites! I have to get my behind on Static as well, I haven't sent it out to any beta or CP yet though, so you're ahead. We can do this!

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    1. Yes we can SK!! I lucked out in finding two BRs. I'm making changes and then will look for at least one more.

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  6. Good luck on the rewrite! That creepy book cover is enough to give me nightmares--is it the author's face redone as a zombie? Sure looks like it!

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  7. Ah, the pain of revision - I know it well. Most of us thought we were "finished" with the first book we wrote, only to realize it needed a LOT more work. Good luck to you on your revisions and to Julie on her book. :)

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    1. Thanks Lexa. I'm actually enjoying the revisions more than I thought I would. The feedback I got from my beta readers definitely helped in that regard. They were both very encouraging, especially the one who'd read my first book.

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  8. Good luck with your rewrite Nancy. Like the title Anticipating Dawn a lot.

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  9. Rewrites are a definite pain when you are first confronted with them, but it's great when you dive in and actually enjoy working on the story again, making it better and stronger! Good luck with the process, =)

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    1. Yes, I am enjoying the rewrite. I did my first go through, making some fairly big changes. Now I've got to do my oral read through again and hopefully get another beta reader. :)

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  10. I love a scary story.

    It's best to give a manuscript time. The revising and editing process seem endless, but it's worth it.

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    1. I agree. I'm trying to get my anxiousness under control Medeia.

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  11. Best of luck with your edits! You can do it! :-)

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  12. Feel confident. You'll get there, Nancy, nice and easy with it. Take care.

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  13. I hope the tweeking goes well!
    Like an avocado... not yet, not yet, not yet, NOW I'M PERFECT, now brown and gross.
    Find the soft green perfection.

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