Here’s
another two-fer: The A to Z Challenge plus the Save-a-Word Saturday blog hops. Click on the links to learn more about them.
S-A-W
word for today: Raploch – (noun) coarse, woolen cloth, made from the worst kind
of wool, homespun and not dyed.
S-A-W
theme: Weddings
AtoZ
letter: R
The Heirloom Raploch
Stranger
things have happened, so Starla didn’t say anything when Chandler gave her the raploch. It was old, more matted grey than luscious black, smelled of mothballs
and was tattered in many places. She held it in one hand and stared at it, dreading
the thought of putting such an old scarf against her skin.
“You
can have it,” Chandler said, looking at Starla with his dark brown eyes that
never quite landed on hers. “It was my grandmother’s.”
Tears
moistened his eyes. Seeing this, Starla’s heart began to swell and sway inside
of her in tune with the melody that resounded in its chambers.
Forgetting about the moldy smell, the ratty look and the rough feel of its coarse
material, she took it in both hands and held it just under her chin. “Chandler,
I’ll keep this raploch forever.”
His
deep brown face shaded darker with embarrassment, a protective reflex so as not
to cry. Starla looked away out of respect. He gingerly lifted the raploch from
Starla’s hands and wrapped it around her shoulders. “It was her mother’s, and I
think her mother’s before that. I have no sisters… so it’s been mine since I was
ten.”
Starla
never met Chandler’s grandmother, since she died one week ago, the week
Chandler came to stay with an elderly cousin, the week when Starla learned
how his grandmother had been the most important person in his life.
And
now Chandler gave Starla the raploch, his heirloom. There was no doubt that she
would sleep with it every night until Chandler was officially hers. Imagining their wedding was easier now that she had a part of him with her.
No wonder why it was so old. I keep something from my grandmother but it was hers only, not three generations.
ReplyDeleteYou never know, he could have been a slob and lived with a bunch of moths too. :)
DeleteNice combo today. You are a true Wordologist.
ReplyDeleteAw-w, how sweet! ^-^
ReplyDeleteI wouldn't want to wear that type of wool.
ReplyDeleteI liked the emotion in that piece.
A nice usage, touching usage. Makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside :)
ReplyDeleteThat's so cool to know!
DeleteI'll 2nd the touching storyline. Starla sounds like a Proverbs 31 woman to me.
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing compliment! Thanks so much. :)
DeleteThis was really nice for such a small piece of writing. It makes me wish I could read more.
ReplyDeleteYes, I usually like a cleaner ending, but good enough for this flash fiction piece and challenge. Thanks for stopping by, and congrats again on your book!
DeleteWhat a meaningful gift.
ReplyDeletegreat word and great story :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Evalina!
DeleteGreat job on the two-fer. ;) I didn't know what a raploch was prior to today. ;) Beautiful story.
ReplyDeleteThat word does seem to be dying out, as it's not in a lot of dictionaries. Glad you liked the story.
DeleteThis is lovely, a nice reminder that the value of an item isn't in its beauty, but in its meaning.
ReplyDeleteKathy @ Swagger Writers
Nice way to put it Kathy.
Delete...and imagine the stories tucked away in the folds of that raploch... priceless!
ReplyDeleteWriter In Transit
You can imagine, can't you. That would be a book in itself.
DeleteVery indearing touching story! He obviously cared a great deal for Starla to have departed with the Raploch!
ReplyDeleteYes, truly. Thanks Betty. :)
DeleteThat was charming! And I learned a word. I loved the way you conveyed his emotion...and hers. Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed that Diana.
DeleteI never heard of raploch before. Love learning a new word. And this is another wonderful story. :)
ReplyDeleteA word that's dying out. Need to try and keep it alive!
Deletevery sweet short story
ReplyDeletenot familiar with the raploch but the sentiment is clear
happy A to Zing
LadysKnight
Thanks. It's good to know people enjoyed it.
DeleteYou certainly have a full blogger's plate!
ReplyDeleteI had never heard that word before. The way you blended A to Z with S-A-W was masterful. Very sweet story.
ReplyDelete#atozchallenge, Kristen's blog: kristenhead.blogspot.com
Thanks Kristen. Glad you found this post way back here! :)
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